Analytical Reflection on Mock Presentation

During the mock presentation which was conducted on last Thursday 2th November 2017 with the format of pairing up with another group to present our ideas to each other. Our group (group 3) was being paired up with group 4.

Areas of improvements:
·         Facial Expressions
·         Hand Gestures
·         Eye Contact
·         Delivery
o    Pronunciation
o    Speed/Smooth
o    Preparation
o    Enthusiasm

Facial Expressions

My peers commented that I should be friendlier during the presentation (smile more😁). However, I found it to be quite difficult for me as during the presentation, my mind was focusing on the slide and was hard for me to pay attention on my facial expressions.


Hand Gestures

After doing some self-reflection and comments from my peers, my hand gestures do not really emphasis on the main points of my presentation hence, more practice are required.

Eye Contact

Eye Contact was insufficient as throughout the presentation, most of the time, I was looking at the computer screen and did not really pause and look at the audience in their eyes.

Delivery

During my presentation, there were sections where it was not smooth, i.e. pause, keep on rephrasing on the same point etc. Furthermore, my pronunciation was not clear/pronounce the words wrongly and the emphasis of the word was wrong. Lack of preparation was obvious as I kept on looking at the slides and the enthusiasm was not there.



Therefore, in conclusion more rehearsals are required before a presentation to practice on my facial expressions, hand gestures, eye contact and delivery. A script will be good to make my presentation to run more smoothly and to practice more on my pronunciation, variation of my tones and to sound and look my enthusiasm. (Through tones, hand gestures and body languages)




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